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The Thing You'll Miss The Most
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shadowfiction
shadowfiction
IT'S ALL ABOUT SEX (R) BY IAMSHADOW
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shadowfiction From: shadowfiction Date: March 16th, 2008 10:36 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm going to pinch a paragraph from a reply I left someone on TQP, if that's alright, because it sums up pretty concisely what I feel about the dynamic in this story:

I really had to make her very self-centred, because I couldn't imagine her doing something so vicious as setting bees on Ron unless she was that way. It's the first time I've ever written her behaving badly without redeeming her. In a lot of ways, this was about showing how unbalanced things could end up if Hermione wouldn't give a little of her control up and if Ron let his self esteem issues dominate his behaviour. Both of them are at their worst, but we feel sorry for Ron because he's the perceived victim.

I'm glad you like the story despite the unkind portrayal. I just knew when I saw the prompt 'the birds and the bees' exactly what this story was going to be.
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