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The Thing You'll Miss The Most
More than friends, closer than brothers....
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hpuckle From: hpuckle Date: December 22nd, 2007 08:59 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, this was gorgeous!

Hermione gave my hand a tight squeeze then asked another question, one that made my pulse jump again.

God, I love that phrase. I can really feel it... .

shadowfiction From: shadowfiction Date: December 23rd, 2007 01:42 am (UTC) (Link)
Glad you liked it!

I love hearing about people's favourite lines or sections, because often they're different to mine and it's interesting to me to her what resonated for people the most. That line was actually one I had to rewrite at least twice because I'd reused certain words too many times in succession, and I had to come up with alternatives.
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