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The Thing You'll Miss The Most
More than friends, closer than brothers....
shadowfiction
shadowfiction
LONGING (PG) BY IAMSHADOW
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maple_mahogany From: maple_mahogany Date: December 22nd, 2007 08:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
*sigh*

That felt good to read. Very good. I liked the slow build; very needy and tangible without random, untoward smut.

Well done! :)

shadowfiction From: shadowfiction Date: December 23rd, 2007 01:39 am (UTC) (Link)
I was something that obviously wanted a slow build, because it was supposed to be a ficlet!

And although random, untoward smut has its place, it felt better leaving this abiguous. I'll bet everyone who reads it has a different idea about what they think happened when Hermione shut the door behind her. Did they kiss again? Did they cry? Did they talk? Did they just fall into bed together, whether to hold each other like they had been or explore each other's bodies? *I* don't know myself. I think all of those things, or a combination of them, would be believable.
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